Editing and the Workshop

A workshop is a room or building which provides both the area and tools (or machinery) that may be required for the manufacture or repair of manufactured goods.

(from Wikipedia)

The Creative Writing program at UBC is primarily a workshop-based program. That is to say that my classes in the program involve 12-18 students and a professor sitting around a big table and talking about the students’ pieces. Each week 1-3 students bring in copies of a piece they’ve written and hand them out. We all take them home, read them, edit them, write notes all over them, and bring them back the next week. That two-hour class is then devoted to discussing those pieces. And then the next students hand out and we do it all again.

I wanted to take a moment to briefly talk about how useful this process is to a writer. First of all, you get 18 people to edit 2-4 pieces of yours per class per year, which is always useful. But it’s also interesting because the group is so large and so varied–we’re not looking at my three closest friends editing the work. This means that everyone in the class is coming from a very different background of reading and writing. So if I write something that could be called science fiction, it’s interesting to see the different responses from those who read science fiction and those who don’t. Ultimately, you get a real look at the story, rather than preconceived notions about a genre, as well as how the story might be received by those who may not be the intended audience–and this is invaluable to a writer.

We don’t have lectures about writing, except for the occasional time when a professor takes five minutes to talk about a particular concept. And yet, I learned more in my first year in the program and my writing improved more than it ever has. When you look at that many different stories and pieces, you get a great sense for what you can do with words. If you edit something and say, “No, that didn’t work,” then you know what not to do in your own writing. And the discussions that happen bring up all sorts of interesting issues you never would have thought about.

The discussions are actually what might be most interesting–18 people bouncing ideas off of each other. Things come up in the discussions that no one person would ever have thought of–whether it’s ideas for the story, or insights into what it means or what it could mean, etc. It’s also great because you get people who say, “No, this story didn’t work for me,” and then others who jump to its defence–all while the author just sits there and listens. Because of course you’re not going to please everyone. But maybe if you listen to both what some people didn’t like and what others liked, you can tweak the story and please everyone a little more–reach the greatest audience you can.

And you end up finding people in the group you consistently disagree with, and maybe as a result you don’t usually take their advice into account–some people just have fundamentally different ideas of what a given story should accomplish. But that’s okay–they’re just not your intended audience.

I think the most important part of the workshop, though, is this: it’s a place where we put out for others to see first drafts of pieces, works in progress, raw ideas that haven’t been refined, that aren’t ready for publication. I usually go into a workshop thinking, I know there’s something wrong with this piece, it’s not ready–I just might not know what it is that needs help.

But because they’re still raw, the workshop needs to be, in the words of my fiction professor Linda Svendsen, a safe environment. The writer needs to feel safe putting their work out there for others to see, needs to be able to trust the other people in the room with their baby. That means that while they’re looking for constructive help with the work, it’s too raw to take anything too harsh.

I’ve found this a lot with friends I ask to edit my work outside of a workshop. I give them a piece and they come back with all sorts of criticism, and I go home crying. (Not really. Just inside.) And then they say that if I’m going to be a writer, I need to learn to take criticism.


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